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Write Sales Letters
That PULL
How to get marketing materials that make
money....
and don't wind up in the trash.
by Dr. Kevin Nunley
Sales letters can be a terrific way to
get your message out. Mailed, faxed, emailed, simply hung on
doors--you and I get sales letters everyday. My regular mail box
is constantly filled with "junk mail."
A friend reports several hundred
unsolicited email messages each day.
Why do so many businesses--both large
and small--use sales letters? It's simple. Well-written direct
mail works. Here's why.
Letters are a very personal form of
communication. Even when you know the same letter was sent to
thousands of people, it still has some of the feel of a personal
note from a friend. People who are good at writing sales letters
know this and use it. They do their best to create a personal
bond between the letter and the reader.
Your sales letter should talk
intimately with the reader. Chat informally with short sentences
and simple words. Make it easy for the reader to QUICKLY
understand your offer. Most people will only give your letter a
three second once-over before deciding to read further or toss
the letter into the trash. Make your offer attractive and put it
right up front.
FIVE SURE-FIRE SALES LETTER
FORMULAS.
One of the great things about direct
mail--regular or electronic--is that you get an immediate and
measurable response. Sales letters that work bring in a
measurable number of return messages, phone calls, return cards,
and sales. Over the years, direct marketers have landed on some
favorite formulas that always seem to work. Here are five of my
favorites.
1. Tell a story. Notice how many of the
email sales letters you get follow this format. One I get over
and over from different people goes "Six months ago my company
was downsized and I found myself out of a job. I expected the
worst. Then I heard about the XXX Company. Now I'm an
independent agent making three times what I did on my old job.
And I'll never be downsized again!" It's hard to resist reading
a story, especially if it sounds like someone who has a
situation similar to our own. People love success stories when
they tell us how to get success ourselves.
2. A message from the president. People
respect a note from the head of the company. It lends authority
to the message and makes the reader feel important. That's a
good way to make a sale. This formula can also be used to let
the reader in on some inside information, another sales letter
favorite.
3. Offer something free. Maybe it's a
free or discounted visit to your store or office. A doctor who
lives down the street from me built his patient list by sending
out several hundred postcards offering "10% off your first
visit." The prospect who is interested in your product or
service will appreciate more information. Offer it in the form
of a free Special Report, brochure, or booklet. (By the way,
write me at
kevin@DrNunley.com
or call (801)-253-4536 for my free info-packed Special Report on
marketing your business!)
4. Ask a question. "Are your days
hectic and frustrating?" This is good old-fashioned psychology.
When you ask a question, the reader is enticed to answer it. It
mentally involves the reader in your sales letter and offer.
Some experts say to ask a series of questions, each likely being
answered with "yes." The final question has the reader saying
"yes" to a sale.
5. Point out a problem that the
prospect has. This is the adverting classic. Watch for it in
marketing and commercials everywhere. Direct the reader's
attention to a problem, then make the problem seem worse. Once
you've established the problem as a major impediment in the
reader's life, introduce your service or product as the
solution.
WRITE A HEADLINE TO GRAB ATTENTION!
Most sales letters begin with a
headline that quickly presents the major points. It can be typed
in all capitals like a newspaper headline:
THE NEW WIDGET 2000 WILL SIMPLIFY YOUR
LIFE--AND IT'S 40% OFF THIS MONTH ONLY!
You can also write the headline in
paragraph fashion just above the salutation:
The new widget 2000 will simplify your
life!
And it's 40% off this month only!
Dear Computer Enthusiast,
And that brings us to another point.
When you're sending out lots of sales letters, a salutation to
the general jobs or interests of your readers works just as well
as typing in each reader's name. Instead of "Dear Friend," use
"Dear Parent," "Dear Basketball Fan," "Dear Auto Owner."
Include a P.S. at the end of your
letter. Studies show that most readers skip to the P.S. before
they read anything else! The P.S. should briefly restate the
main points of your offer.
Finally, stress benefits rather than
features. How do the features of your service or product improve
the customer's life, work, or pocketbook. The benefits of your
offer may be obvious to you, but don't leave it up to the reader
to figure them out, no matter how obvious they may seem. Stress
benefits. Link them to the features your offer.
Sales letters can be a wonderfully
personal way to introduce people to your product, service,
organization, or idea. By using some of the ideas and formulas
I've mentioned above, you can produce sizzling sales letters
that produce results.
Kevin Nunley provides marketing advice
and copy writing for businesses and organizations. Read all his
money-saving marketing tips at
http://DrNunley.com/ Reach him
at
kevin@drnunley.com
or (801)253-4536. |